Monday, May 28, 2012

Spectrum…


Spectrum…

Stranded in hail storm
Shades of spectrum astonish-
Off branch old leaves fall

~xox~
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  1. Hubert WilliamsMay 30, 2012 at 6:37 PM

    Nice Haiku but one syllable too long.

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    1. UnknownJune 1, 2012 at 5:25 AM

      yes line 2 had 8..corrected now..thanks for pointing that out...tc :-)

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